Its the year 2450 the world about to split into pieces. we have to go or its to late lets go.
5,4,3,2,1 bonce shooting up in space “wow!” I said in a whisper. Now were on the moon
I put the flag on the moon lets get ready to go to mars. “The sun is get smaller and
smaller every time we go farrier “

Finlay we got there mars is called the red planet. Ready to land. “Landed!” “lets look there’s nothing around were the city!”



1 problem is making friends with the aliens that will take along time.
The 2 problem is the storms so my gun must have lots power.
The last problem is there is no air then we can't breath and we will die


1 solution is that we can make a mask which makes gravity turn into air.
Plus air and oxygen come out of the mask so there can be air in mars.

The second solution is stopping the storms from killing you.
so we invented a gun to suck the storms into the gun and safe.

At to play the beginning of the year the year 5s got net book and it was so cool.
It was so cool because I wanted to get better with my writing and spelling.

one positive is games because its fun and get to know the controls better.
The second positive is writing because I get to type instead of write with pencil and paper.

Plus you get to share stuff with people that is cool. And you can get information of the Internet
and go on YouTube.


The negative thing is that the Internet is slow and it distracted.
One is that we have to do to much work.

One is that there less reading in a book. And then we want know how to read.

Finlay we got to the star dome I thought that we were going the dome but we went up one tree hill I was tired. We weren't at the top at all and I was tired.

we were half way and we saw the craters . Room 14 got to the top the view was amazing I could see must of new Zealand.

After that we went to the crater it was fun sliding down and people made staff out of rocks
it like cool. me and my friends raced up the hill and I came second.

next we went back to go to the star dome. we got there we went into the star dome and we watched the movie about a boy and his friend.

him and his friend made a cardboard box into a space ship look cool but its small. They went into space and they went to different planet it was fault like I was there.

Next we went got to look at the stuff like space clothes and the worm hole and planets.
we also look at the space room it was cool.

This is some of

my favorite pictures

and brands

Comet ice cream

Eagerly waiting I was sating in a circle with my hands washed to get my comet made out of ice cream. First we smashed the cookie's into pieces of dust with the 1000’s blocks it was great and it looked crunchy. Next miss squires put the hundreds and thousands and the chocolate sprinkles
into the dust .

After that we were getting our ice cream which was the ice and the cone was the tail it was a ice cream comet yummy.
Finlay it was my turn I got the ice cream when I got it my hand went numb.Then I quickly put it in the dust and put it on the cone.

"Cold Cold Cold!" biting the ice cream and the dust. Its was frizzing but it was delicious I felt like some more.


It was the end of day and I felt great.

From Immersion Assembly Term 4 2011

It’s the first day of the term. The bell rings we line up for the Immersion Assembly.We go to the Immersion Assembly so we know what our topic is for this term. It happens every term.

As soon as we got in the hall I saw all the teachers were dressed up in funky costumes.
I knew what it was about by looking at them. I figured that it was probably about space.

Team 2’s item was a space rap where the teachers did robotic movements. They had boxes on their heads with lights and they wearing black clothes . The rap was saying the planets names out fast.

My favourite item was Team 5’s movie about Star Wars. It was some scenes out of the movie but they put their faces onto the actors. It was funny. When they talked I was laughing.

As we were walking out said to myself “This term is going to be cool”.

Surfing

While I was in the pool I started gliding gracefully. When I got to the other end and jumped up, I swallowed a gulp of water.I grabbed the flutter board then Ms Squires said “Go!” Off I went with a powerful kick. With difficulty I tried to keep afloat by pushing my stomach up. I thought in my mind I was going to drown but I made it.

Me geting saved

“Help.” My pectoral fins are pinned to my body,” I thought desperately Gasping for breath I struggled to wiggle out of the gill net. I was frightened and fatigued.

I felt a vibration coming towards me. Was it friend or foe? Worried and anxious I got a pipe and put it in his mouth.”SPLASH” into the water he went.


He approached me, he came closer and closer. They was eye contact I knew here to help. But he pulled out a knife.

The man pulled the net to the boat they started to cut finally they got one of my patrol fins free. They manged to get the other one free. Next I drived the man as far as I called.
suddenly they stared cutting more and they got me free

I was happy that they got me free so I wanted to do a big display. So I did 40 breach's and tail slaps and pectoral pins.

Fire Safety

“Beep beep beep! What that noise? It's the smoke alarm! Oh no there is a fire !”

Did you know that 90% of New Zealand houses have no smoke alarms or they are not working. It can take only 3 minutes for a house to get burnt down.

Matches and lighters must stay away from children. Smoke alarms must be on at all times with a good batteries. When you are cooking you always keep a on the cooking, and must keep children away from ovens and stoves. Keys must stay in doors at all times so you can always get out.

What to do in a fire? Make sure keys are in doors. Close doors to stop a fire spreading. You have to have a meeting place like your letter box If you are inside you need to get down get low get out. Next call 111.

As we were walking into the hall we saw Room 16 playing badminton. I saw them hitting the shuttle with their rackets. I said to myself “I think
this is going to be cool!”.

Our teacher Donna told us what to do so then I picked my partner and it was Texas. Off we went to a place to play. Next Texas served the shuttle it went air born in the air then I hit the shuttle. It was soaring through the air to Texas and he got out I said “Yes!”


After that we had a game of badminton it was the first four people . Some one got out then it was my turn. I thought that I was going to lose. Next he served then I reached out for the shuttle I whacked it. Off it went and I got same one out.

Here comes the snow!

The shock of snow falling in Auckland was followed by tears of joy. People in Pukekohe, Western Springs and Downtown were extremely happy. What a day to remember. It hadn’t snowed in Auckland in forty years, making it the third time this century! Unlike Aucklander’s the people of the South Island were angry and upset. They were making a massive commotion because they had huge piles of snow and roads covered in ice to deal with.

The first rugby ball

A long time ago in the 1800s the rugby balls were made out of pigs bladder . The oval balls
were a nonstandard size because it depended on the right pig, if there was a big pig there would be a big ball but if there was a small pig there would be a small ball.

The Immersion assembly for Term 3

The first day of the term the bell rang we went into the hall the teachers were all dressed up. Mr Jacobson was dressed up in a Irish costume shouting “IRELAND!” “IRELAND!” Our topic this term is Keep Your Eye On The Ball. Because we are learning about the rugby world cup.

My favorite team was team four because there movie was funny. Mr Somerville was the funniest because he was acting as George Nepia how he was a ref and he took the ball and got a try .

I felt happy because our topic is Keep your eye on the ball. I felt like this term was going to be cool term.

Motat

On Wednesday July the 7 we went to Motat so we can learn about inventions, because we are learning about Bigger ,Better, Faster ,Stronger. We went on to the bus and we went to Motat. It was a long drive finally but we got there and I was happy .

Our first place to go was the Tactile Dome, that was my favorite thing . It was pitch black . It was so dark that you could not see anything. We were fumbling around then we found a way, we had to go up the rope. We went up the rope and went through the hole. Then I crashed down on to the ground “HELP!” I said. I went through the hole, down the slide and I came out .

We also went to the Earthquake Cafe. it was shaking from side to side it was cool. Massive vibrations were making us move around. We were juddering, it was fun.

After that I went to the mirror maze I went in for the first time then crashed . It looked like there were endless reflections. Then I collided in to the wall it was sore.

Swimming

Over the past two weeks room 14 have had swimming with Room 16. We have been leaning how to swim. One day while we were walking to the pools,nearly there, I saw an eel in the creek.

“Finally we are there” I said as we went in through the pool doors .

When I jumped into the pool I felt deliciously warm. When I pushed myself off the wall I started to kick furiously. As I got to the other side I was exhausted and drained.
While I was in the pool I started gliding gracefully. When I got to the other end and jumped up, I swallowed a gulp of water.I grabbed the flutter board then Ms Squires said “Go!” Off I went with a powerful kick. With difficulty I tried to keep afloat by pushing my stomach up. I thought in my mind I was going to drown but I made it.

My movie is about what I did in the holidays playing on my xbox.




In the holiday I stayed at home playing with my X box. I have a game called Left 4 Dead. I play with my cousin.
When I play we have to try to survive the zombies. One day a zombie came and started overtaking me and I said to my cousin, “Help!”. Finally he came and saved me and then I started to defy the zombies but unfortunately I died - in the game. My score was 4.35 seconds.

Swimming at the pools

Over the past two weeks room 14 have had swimming with Room 16. We have been leaning how to swim. One day while we were walking to the pools I saw an eel in the creek.
“Finally we are there” I said as we went in through the pool doors .

When I jumped into the pool I felt deliciously warm. When I pushed myself off the wall I started to kick furiously. As I got to the other side I was exhausted and drained.
While I was in the pool I started gliding gracefully. When I got to the other end and jumped up, I swallowed a gulp of water. I grabbed the flutter board then Ms Squires said “Go!” Off I went with a powerful kick. With difficulty I tried to keep afloat by pushing my stomach up. I thought in my mind I was going to drown but I made it.I said to myself “Yes I made it”.

As I came out of the pool I felt a shock of cold. My teeth started chattering.

We came back to school and it was lunch time

Immersion Assembly

When I got to the hall I was thinking in my mind, “What is the topic for this team? I said to my friends, “Do you know the topic? “ But they said “No.”
All of a sudden Darth Vader came out, which was Mr Burt. He said in an evil, scary voice, “We are learning about Bigger, Better, Faster, Stronger.”
After that team 1 came out. Team 1’s item was about healthy food and they were giving food out. Next team 2 came out their one was about recycling

My holiday

In the holiday I stayed at home playing with my X box. I have a game called Left 4 Dead. I play with my cousin.
When I play we have to try to survive the zombies. One day a zombie came and started overtaking me and I said to my cousin, “Help!”. Finally he came and saved me and then I started to defy the zombies but unfortunately I died - in the game. My score was 4.35 seconds.

Last week on Friday we had our school picnic it was at the Pt England reserve . I was playing on the playground , on the slide it was cool.

After that I went to the beach I was playing with the clay, making balls and throwing them into the water. I liked playing with the clay it was all soft and slimy.

Next I went to find some crabs I found one and it had big claws. It was about to pinch me. “Oh no!” I said. Quickly I was digging it in the sand then I gave it to Calvin and he ate it. It was funny and yuck as well. After that the sea started to go to high tide. So I went to eat my lunch. After lunch I went to play bay blades.It was good because I had a long ripper. It makes me win.

Jayden Acrostic Poem

Joy for having fun
Aways happy
Yes I like school
Duty to be good
Everyday I like playing
Name is jayden

In the holidays mum and I went to Wellington on the bus. It took a very long time to get there. By the time we got there it was 7:3 . After that my Aunty picked us up and took us to MacDonalds to eat. Finally we went to my Nana's house to stay for the night. I was playing on my Nana's computer playing games. I was playing Sponge Bob and watching videos.

Next we went to the center to buy some food for my Nana and me. After that we went back to my Nana's house and I got an Ice block - it was nice, then I went to sleep.